My goal was to do more dialogue since I don’t do it a lot.
Sirilia and Jule stared at the wide cavern.
“Let’s go in!” she said jumping around.
“No, no!” Jule said worriedly.
Sirilia hit her arm half-heartedly. She danced towards the mouth and opened a chip bag. Jule sighed and glared at Sirilia. “Only for a moment. You got that?”
Sirilia nodded happily. Only a few steps later did they hear a growl. Jule moved her torch to the sound. She gasped. There lay a sleeping crocodile. With orange powdered fingers Sirilia poked him. Deep within his belly there was a rumble and as the crocodile opened his eye, the cave collapsed.